my original version of Dwelling (in a shroud) comes in at six and a half minutes long, way too long for the concept of the video, so i knew we would have to edit it. after some discussion, Sean agreed to try doing the edit himself, and has come up with a version that shaves almost two minutes off the original running time. as i told him, it sounds fantastic!!! it is TOTALLY different pacing from the full version, but somehow manages to maintain the sensibility and feel of my original song, which is awesome! the new version has a greater sense of movement, and as he did the edit with the narrative of the video in mind, i can already picture how it will all come together. everything is slowly taking shape! cheers.